I love you without
knowing how, or when, or from where.
I love you simply,
without problems or pride:
I love you in this way
because I do not know
any other way of loving
but this, in which
there is no I or you,
so intimate that your hand
upon my chest is my hand,
so intimate
that when I fall asleep your eyes close.
Ahhh Pablo Neruda…sonnet #14 I believe. I see some differences though, so maybe your take on his poem. I read this at my sister’s wedding. Great choice to share 🙂
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Great, You remember this one.
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Right
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Yes, beautiful…a favorite. 🙂
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Excellent
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Love the comparisons but, specifically, your last four lines. Very sensitive and “moving”.
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Aww!! Such a lovely poem! ☺☺☺
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Sublime !
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Nice poetry!
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Hello Shekher. I have nominated you for Liebster Award.
https://gharkepakwan.wordpress.com/2016/03/08/liebster-award-2-my-4th-award/
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Beautiful
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lovely poem ray…loved the last line so much…
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very nice poem…
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Thanks ☺
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I love this! Thanks!
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Thanks ☺
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Beautiful 😍
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☺☺
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Man, you just got to love those last four lines. 🙂
“so intimate that your hand
upon my chest is my hand,
so intimate
that when I fall asleep your eyes close”
Simply magic! Thanks for sharing, Shekhar.
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Most welcome.
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🙂
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This is beautiful!
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All posts are so lovely. It’s a pleasure to have discovered this amazing blog to follow. The writings really touch the heart and are so relatable that I feel they are just for me. In love with these words…❤️
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Thanks. Anyway where are you from?
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India
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I love this one by Pablo.
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Me also..
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Hi. It’s beautiful. Love, inseparable. Beautiful (again!)
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Love is when your souls collide not just bodies! ♥ You are so amazing 🙂 Excellent piece of writing!
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Glad you like it. Thanks themagicalwish
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Beautiful sensitive writing!!
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Memories… Nice piece
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❤
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I love this! It’s so well-written 😌
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Wow. So beautiful and gentle. I was compelled to comment. Count me as a fan my friend.
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This is amazing. I feel my soul mended. Loving your blog already 🙂
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You writing is really deep and meaningful. Keep writing more.
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Beautiful.
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